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Blue Fluff

a baby blue fringe ran over the back of my hand I stroke its silken thread to trail a hundred fingers of silk, over my face tornados of chaos surround the outer wards and levee's wash with the tears of family and friends lost in halls of white in a ball of tranquility I sit dethroned the Empress of Pain, now content to be a shadow of yesterday the frayed ends of my fringe drift through the fall of twilight sparkling the stars and waxing to smile, at man in the moon and in dreams of faded bits of nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 5:34:00 AM
Jayne, you have such wonderful words to your works thank you very much [Duncan]
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:10:00 PM
mixed up dream sounding to me?? enjoyed though!! baby blue??
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:03:00 PM
wonderful poetry, Jayne. I completely forgot you were here since I have not heard from you in so long. But I saw your name while reviewing my fav poets list. Hope you are doing ok. Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:21:00 PM
masterfully poetic, Jayne.
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Date: 9/28/2010 8:51:00 AM
It's sad to think of you feeling like the "Empress of Pain," Jayne. The feelings of loneliness and despair ring clearly in this heartfelt poem. Many feel this way from time to time and I hope you are not experiencing such feelings right now. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:35:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
You are bwelcome.I am not against changes 8dw. On the contrary I believe in it. But the changes should be in an apt direction. Jayne.
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