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Blue Fluff

a baby blue fringe
ran over the back of my hand 
I stroke its silken thread
to trail a hundred
fingers of silk, over my face

tornados of chaos
surround the outer wards
and levee's wash with the
tears of family and friends
lost in halls of white 

in a ball of tranquility
I sit dethroned 
the Empress of Pain, 
now content 
to be a shadow 
of yesterday 

the frayed ends 
of my fringe
drift through the fall 
of twilight

sparkling the stars
and waxing to smile,
at man in the moon 
and in dreams of faded 
bits of nothing

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  1. Date: 10/11/2010 5:34:00 AM
    Jayne, you have such wonderful words to your works thank you very much [Duncan]

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 6:10:00 PM
    mixed up dream sounding to me?? enjoyed though!! baby blue??

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 11:03:00 PM
    wonderful poetry, Jayne. I completely forgot you were here since I have not heard from you in so long. But I saw your name while reviewing my fav poets list. Hope you are doing ok. Andrea

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 9:21:00 PM
    masterfully poetic, Jayne.

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 8:51:00 AM
    It's sad to think of you feeling like the "Empress of Pain," Jayne. The feelings of loneliness and despair ring clearly in this heartfelt poem. Many feel this way from time to time and I hope you are not experiencing such feelings right now. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 6:35:00 AM
    Very descriptive and expressive work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
    You are bwelcome.I am not against changes 8dw. On the contrary I believe in it. But the changes should be in an apt direction. Jayne.