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Blossom Moon

Blossom Moon A feint magnolia mist gently caresses the distant murmuring of the night sky Swords clatter to the barren earth as the promise of peace washes over me I hold my hands in front of my face wondering what I have become Have these hands forged goodness or pain? have my words raised hope or fear? The blossom moon fills my eyes with strength sending despair to silent shadows as endless eternity bathes in glowing light oceans wax and wane children laugh and play hearts surrender and rejoice Under the blossom moon © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 11/16/2010 5:45:00 AM
I love this, and it says why you were my favorite since long ago ... it's a common meshing of our soul ... we two crusaders of the word, carrying our swords in pots of wine. Go forth, my son, do heaven's work ... history here rewards you before its done. One love, Jimmy
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Date: 11/13/2010 8:58:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. Yes the suicide was a joke as i needed to rhyme. The poem flows well. I really enjoyed the manner in which you brought the poen to a close with "Under the blossom moon"
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Date: 11/13/2010 8:46:00 AM
"hearts surrender and rejoice" love that James! Great write ;)
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:27:00 AM
A very touching poem Mr. Goff ! I especially am drawn to your 3rd and 4th stanzas in this poem. The entire poem flows well and is captivating, thank you for sharing your thoughts ! much love, james
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Date: 11/12/2010 6:58:00 PM
Lovely expressions Jimbo in your lines of perfect poetry tonight... under the blossom moon sounds like a peaceful place to remain in life.. tranquility exudes from this piece ..enjoyed ..with luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:47:00 PM
You have penned very nice expressions on Blossom Moon, Oceans wax and wane, children laugh and play.... enjoyed the write, James
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