Blossom

Cherry blossoms pink- Pastel petals soon will bring Sweeter fruit than ink

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/5/2013 12:51:00 PM

Beautiful haiku on Cherry blossom. It brings a nice picture here. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2013 3:36:00 PM

Yes, those cherries are sweeter than ink penned 'pon paper..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:56:00 PM

Ray, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Joseph May

Date: 4/22/2013 4:10:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Ray

Len Gasun

Date: 4/21/2013 8:29:00 AM

Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Ray! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/21/2013 1:51:00 AM

Many congratulations Ray xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 11:28:00 PM

Big congrats, I think I had not had the chance to see this one yet.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2013 2:02:00 PM

Such a cheery cherry description!!! :) reminds me of trying to get the cherry juice off my kids clothes (that pink ink)!