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Blissful Thorn

Like pollen to the bee I am drawn to thee Your sweetness intoxicating Like bears to honey with disposition sunny your charm alluring Yet Like the prick of a rose to the unaware nose your intentions alarming and the blissful thorn from the skin torn a thankful awakening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/11/2008 5:35:00 PM
I like the flow of this poem and the words. The first stanza flows very well and is intoxicating with love. I like the shift in the second half of the poem. It certainly reflects a different image. The juxtapositioning is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 12:27:00 AM
Great write Trudy. Love, Chitra
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