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Bliss State

When fate decides to bring you love.. smile..
for fickle fate oft omits the finer things,
bless the ground, stay enamored, yet, awhile.

Love, ah love, it is beauty without guile
and when gifted so your hearts will take to wings.
When fate decides to bring you love.. smile...

There is no emotion more versatile 
bringing happiness to squires and King's
bless the ground, stay enamored, yet, awhile.

See the faultless features which beguile
and join your woven fingers with a ring.
When fate decides to bring you love.. smile..

You found a pairing more than mercantile
to such joy may your two hearts ever cling
bless the ground, stay enamored, yet, awhile.

To Bride and Groom a toast to love nubile
and all the bliss that loving lips can bring.
When fate decides to bring you love.. smile..
bless the ground, stay enamored, yet, awhile.

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:49:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Debbie, enjoyed reading and loved it, Love Debra

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Debbie - many congrats on your win in my competition - I loved this from the start - if you soup mail me your address I will get a prize to you. Love Janette

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:47:00 PM
    I called it! WINNER. Congrats, Debs.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:19:00 AM
    MY BIG CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GRAND WIN, DEBBIE! I REALLY LOVE THIS!! thanks again for making me win in your contest!! Good luck and good health always!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:16:00 AM
    congrats sweeite xx

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 4:42:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. I like it you did a good job on this one!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:44:00 PM
    Very lovely sentiments expressed so well in this form. Congratulations on your beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:04:00 PM
    great write as always Debbie oxox

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Lovely Villanelle here on newly weds by you Debbie! I love the form too. Very well penned, good luck.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:09:00 PM
    WOW, this is the best one I have seen because you were ambitious enough to take on villanelle form. I love that form and wish I had thought of one with this lovely rhyme pattern myself. If I dont see this one high in the list, I'll be disappointed.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:37:00 PM
    Awesome villanelle, Deb! Putting it into my favs! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:58:00 PM
    How would life be hosted without love ... without hug ... without a kiss. Lovely poem Debbie. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)