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Blind Lovers

Though they are both blind, bodies close tight,lips apart deep kisses lingered, They can feel each others breath; Lost in the world of darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/29/2014 1:42:00 AM
Very well thought out write on the theme, Olusegun. congrats
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:51:00 PM
Hi Olusegun, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/28/2014 1:56:00 PM
Olusegun,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:35:00 AM
wonderful Tanka! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:10:00 AM
wow, this is a great poem, Olusequn. You really got right into their skin!!
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Date: 6/15/2012 1:58:00 AM
Hmmm...deep tho'ts...Are they spiritually blind or truly blind?...Very good tanka, Olusegun. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 6/14/2012 7:14:00 PM
OA,,enjoyed..pd
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