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Blessing Or Curse

Madness grasping brain Flowing, erupting, insane Feelings, paper pen

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/29/2011 8:49:00 PM

I would have to rewrite the last line for me....feelings, coffee, laptop! haha. I love your clever thinking here, Lizzie. Haiku are your cup of tea darling. You just didn't know til now. Hope u are doing great today. Would u believe we just got our first snow fall today? Light and fluffy like noodle...ahhhhh. Love, Gwendolen

Annabelle Jane

Date: 11/29/2011 2:02:00 PM

How did I ever survive before reading your poems?? Beautiful and it flows brilliantly x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:07:00 PM

For Poe it was a curse since he died a drunk and penniless. But maybe for some it works out!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:03:00 PM

Lizzie... did you know I met Nathan Dilts here on the soup... look at him... on your comments below... isn't he the cutest evil person ever...lol..... He's from Oregon, and I'm from Texas... and he moved to Texas to be with me... wow..I'm so lucky.... and you are not cursed... just penned out really well.... with the madness that speaks from the darkness.... love this one..not insane at all... xoxoox...p.d.

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/28/2011 4:32:00 PM

Is it really Madness?..Ha,ha.Very nice :o)

Nathan D.

Date: 11/27/2011 11:07:00 PM

awesome lizzie, make me think

Don Johnson

Date: 11/27/2011 8:21:00 PM

rantings , madness ya ken, thrown up sucked back and then, johnsons gone him lost him pen, might just see ya later....:) then...