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Black Note

Thought that I would be alone Up in the skyline Thought that I would be lost Drown by the sea Together we're holding hands Gripping one another within the tidal waves Our time has stopped Fate has spoken Laughters, curiosities, plans and goals Reunions, hopes and loves Blur within the haze Abandoned in tragedy Landed to the new dimension Ushered by the prayers Don't cry, love... Just don't... We are walking to the land of Lord Keep strong my love... With faith... We still can see the same moon that we used to see As if we stand on the same base Though we are seperate in a distinct room Deep condolence for the victims of plane crash Air Asia qz 8501 may they rest in peace.

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 5/25/2015 8:05:00 PM

Brilliant tribute to those lives no longer present, Yanny. It is true, although they are no longer physically here, their spirit is indeed still alive, and memorable for those loved ones. Great poem overall, enjoyable indeed. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/27/2015 2:21:00 AM

Thank you Jiril for your kindly comment. This has been a dramatic tragedy in my country at that time. The mourn's atmosphere sorely felt by the entire people in my city. The plane departed from my city and supposed to be landed in Singapore. There were 16 children in that plane include infants, and some still has not yet been found by the rescue team. Now I heard that the mission has closed. They discontinue the search for the rest of the victims who still missing.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2014 9:56:00 AM

This is sad but still with a hopeful feel. My prayers go out to the families. Drop by and visit, I miss your comments.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/27/2015 2:28:00 AM

I forget to reply on this one :) thank you Rick for the visit. I am still trying my best to keep supporting you through your work as possible as I could, don't worry Rick, you still one of my favorite poet :) hug, yanny