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Black and White Angels

The black and white angel Meet in a divided sky Embracing each other Eyes of cry The lure of the wrong Innocence of the right Two Angels will join On this mixed cloud night The outcome to be Dilution of face Weaken the black Whiten to grey This fantasy world To carry on Not one so right The other so wrong Blend of hope In this most beautiful place Fantastical want A one angel race http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy4.php

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Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/28/2009 10:26:00 AM

exellent ryming. i love this one! :) ----Ell

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 8/9/2009 9:56:00 PM

I guess the black angel would remind you of your faults and weaknesses and the white angel of your strengths. either one can help you realize you're the grey angel, little white little black. the black angel shows you what you still need to work on in yourself, the white would show you how far you've come. beautiful idea James, I hope I read it right...

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 8/8/2009 12:06:00 PM

very well done dear Highlander....The Southern Belle.....Kristy De La Keur

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/8/2009 5:33:00 AM

Dilemma between the good and the bad,the innocence of the heart,the guilt of the soul....weaken the black whitens to grey-positive outlook to the grey cos which world can be all white and pure...fantasy world-the place of perfection,blend of hope for this world we all search for in life,sometimes hope lead us close to fear,yet an angel can rise upon all fear in dreams--well penned,one of your best writes-moral and depth are its definition ---charma

Gareth Heslop

Date: 8/7/2009 3:54:00 PM

nice imagery...grrth

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/7/2009 9:04:00 AM

I love the images you give us with this write here James, so wonderful how our eyes see the world. Excellent piece, so on to my favs it goes!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/7/2009 5:46:00 AM

A beautiful write, James...bowls me over! "Whitens to grey" a merging and blending that creates its own authenticy! This piece holds its own genuine place and probes the mind of the reader. The best to you and yours...God's blessings to you! Mikki

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2009 5:21:00 AM

Beautifully written. Great job. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/7/2009 5:11:00 AM

Fantastic writing as usual James. Thanks for sharing. Love, Carol