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Black and White

My love - When you leave I feel black all day. Hands hit up down your tune I play. You in my heart high low notes flow. But my keys are cold as white snow. Black night brings tears they fall like rain. Come soon touch my soul take my pain. March 7, 2016. PIC 1. Piano Keys United Colours: Black and White contest {25 lines Two words per line 50 words 50 syllables} Feb 17 _The Colors Black and WhiteContest Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/26/2017 6:17:00 PM
Many congrats on your top-notch win, Meenakshi. Great writing! Elaine
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Date: 2/23/2017 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi! :-)
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:17:00 PM
Romantic and lovely,Meenakshi!
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi, well done...
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:56:00 PM
A 7 for your beautiful WINNING poem, Meenakshi! Janice
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2016 7:37:00 PM
Meenakshi, congratulations on your black and white win:-)
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Date: 3/10/2016 6:18:00 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 3/10/2016 8:23:00 AM
Very romantic and creative poem...congrats
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/10/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thank You...
Date: 3/7/2016 8:24:00 AM
Oh, you really did a beautiful job on your entry. I hope to see this one as a top winner! #7
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 3/7/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Connie...

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