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Old and arcane, bittersweet, deep hidden secrets, quiescent they repose, serene and tranquil and still; until they come creeping flamboyant, vivid and bedazzling, luscious, sweet and seductive, tactile, tangible and loud. Quintessence is their essence in pure raw pith, my soul the intercessor with ambivalent mingled feeling; oh, my pen the immolation, the sacrifice, the ritual offering, that each day gives up bleeding words that flow to paper. __________________________ October 25, 2016 Verse For the contest, 10 Word Challenge sponsor, John Hamilton Fourth Place

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Date: 12/8/2016 3:47:00 PM
Soooo beautiful, Constance! The bittersweet emotions flow so effortlessly from your magical pen! No wonder this is a big winner! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 11/27/2016 8:58:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win your poem is great : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/25/2016 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. You did compact it.
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Date: 10/27/2016 11:43:00 PM
I love your imagery...vividly colorful, Well done!
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:48:00 AM
Stunning. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 10/26/2016 12:32:00 AM
How well used and so quick too, Constance:) amazing:)
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Date: 10/25/2016 7:13:00 PM
Really well done BW. And good luck to you
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Date: 10/25/2016 5:54:00 PM
This was fantastic, an amazing use of the contest words. Really nice Broken Wings
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