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Below is the poem entitled Bittersweet which was written by poet Jeremy Martin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Don't look over the glass peaks
Blue and white china breaking
Hold my hand, hold my hand
Crinkle of brow, wet eyes
Like a spying globe, except it hurts
Because I am afraid of everything
I'm tied down under water to this violin
And even though I can see the sun lacing above me
This is still too hard, and my wings dissolve
I smile at you even though it burns

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:48:00 PM
    Hi Jeremy, about bittersweet... I like the amazing line about the water and violin. I love this poem, and its deep meaning..always~ LINDA