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bitter sweet cage

feeling like a man with a low income wage
am locked in a cage

was i locked?
or did i lock myself?
feeling like i cant leave?
do i wanna leave?

sometimes it feels comfortable,
other times its unbearable,
but i cant leave,
or i dont try to leave,

at times the cage can be called home,
other times i feel like a prisoner,
under the dome!
why wount i leave?
i must leave.

i think i love her and our relationship,
at times it just feels like am caged,
filled with rage,
i gotta leave
leave i tell you!!!

but wait, calm down, breath.
fill at home she says,
like a parrot in a cage.

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  1. Date: 12/21/2013 2:36:00 PM
    I like the mood of indecision and angst you have created.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:38:00 AM
    Wow i can relate to d cage feeling, and being hard n unsure to leave. Superb poem!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:00:00 AM
    great potential there...(check typos brother)