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Bitter

Well I learnt how to be bitter,to live alongside a situation like a creepy ol critter ,,, To try and try and always fall,never get that nerve to stand tall.... Looking fate square in the face in chuckles of rage, I wonder when my mysterious life will turn its page,,,, knowing one might be wrong in their ways they befold, wanting nothing more than their hearts to be warm not so cold... Looking at the present a huge task to feet, if only one could stay focused on the future he'd see it's stronger than week.,, shall I overcome this brutal beast I hold within,,,to walk ever so free inside a conscience of sin..........

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Date: 4/11/2024 11:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:09:00 PM
SEAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/24/2013 8:04:00 AM
enjoyed this one welcome
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Date: 11/23/2013 6:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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