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Bites of Apple Pies

A pple pies, that's what I want to bite. B egging my mom: "Mommy please, please..", as I C ome closer to her.. D ancing a little to the left and right; E very move a way to tempt my mom F or that sweet delicious pie.. G iving her a kiss to her lips. And H ugs so tight.. Finally, I ris, my mom, said yes, yes we go and buy J umping thrice for I am happy and thrilled, I K not my arm to my mom's. L ovingly, not wanting any other mom. M oving fast as we could to buy not one or two but a plentitude of pies. N oting, how generous is my mom for I was just asking for one. O ven-fresh, my mouth waters as I smell the apple pies. P icking one piece, Q uickly, I took a luscious large bite. R ich rumble rush of savory pie S ated my appetite. T aunting me to take more! more! U nder my mom's gaze, Again I eat and eat. V ery delicious, I said to my mom W idening my grin and giving thumbs up. X eric is my throat, I drink and drink. Y ummy! So yummy, that I eat four pies in a row. Z ipper of my pants, my oh my, I hardly can close! *** Xeric means dry. _______________________________________________________ Sponsor Carol Eastman ' Contest Name Your favorite Poem Contest © O. E. Guillermo 9:36PM October 10, 2014

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Date: 3/20/2015 7:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I love this!
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:29:00 PM
Wow Olive a great one and my fav too,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:07:00 PM
Very nice, like it and apple pie :)
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:10:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:30:00 PM
OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2015 9:25:00 AM
thanks much Lolly LInda.. love too.. !
Date: 12/9/2014 9:18:00 AM
Great Abecedarian poem Olive. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2014 10:39:00 PM
thanks much Brenda.. :)! God bless you.. :)!
Date: 12/9/2014 8:53:00 AM
Nicely crafted poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 3/20/2015 9:09:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!
Date: 12/8/2014 12:48:00 PM
Great interpretation of the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:39:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2014 10:38:00 PM
thanks much Jan.. :)!
Date: 12/8/2014 10:53:00 AM
Very clever alphabet poem, Olive, enjoyed it. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2014 10:37:00 PM
thanks much Cheri. :)! I appreciate my place in your contest. :) I enjoyed writing this.. :)!
Date: 10/11/2014 12:20:00 PM
Haha, had me chuckling and hungry at the same time Olive. I've just recently baked 3 Apple Pies as you know, and my work colleagues devoured them. Fine ABC Miss Olive, and tasty also. As for your Zipper, no more second helpings ;) James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 7:11:00 PM
hahahha :D!!! eat for me then.. :P
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:20:00 AM
Too far to throw :(
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 10:30:00 AM
thanks MR. James.. :D hahah why you didn't throw one pie here... :D so ill judge too your apple pie.. :P
Date: 10/10/2014 10:53:00 PM
Olive, my goodness, this is one of the best ABC poems I ever saw and also one of the best in the pie contest. one of YOUR personal bests!! A fave on this one.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 10:26:00 AM
thanks much Andrea.. :D!!! am happy that you like as much as I like writing it when I made this.. :D
Date: 10/10/2014 5:05:00 PM
Heyyyy Olive_eloi....I told you to watch your figure:) But never mind...next time I'll help you with your pies and save you having to eat the whole lot!:) Enjoyed your tricky form...well executed. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/12/2014 10:24:00 AM
staying at home makes me lil chubby Paul... :D!! you know one of my hobby is cooking.. :D!!! and mmmmmmmnnn my forte are sweets :D ;) so you know.. :P
Date: 10/10/2014 10:48:00 AM
Dear Olive, It was the same way at my house! Nothing can beat our mothers' apple pies. (Barbara Gorelick wrote of this as well. I haven't posted mine, not nearly as good as yours.) Wishing you success in the contest with this delightful poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:45:00 PM
Aha.. I shall Visit BArbara's then.. :D!!! After I read PAul's entry I got inspired to expand it... :D!!!! but well, in more happy tone though.. :P hahhaha hope Paul will not mind.. :D
Date: 10/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
wonderful ABC poem made me want pie NOW - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:42:00 PM
thanks much sweet Jan.. :D I appreciate it.. :D!

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