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Birthright Denied

morning sun, a newborn babe, exhales her first breath each dawn in mist daybreak’s kiss straddles the North Carolina and Tennessee line Cherokee Nation’s last reservation remains within a hazy, vaporous veil nearly two centuries crept past since 14,000 ill and hungry Cherokees trekked the Trail of Tears moving westward wearily to sparse lands that precluded hunting, farming by President Jackson’s ignoble decree many perished along the trail sacrificed to a selfish quest for gold travelers still witness indomitable spirits rising to life each night as mist fades with setting sun accusations of injustice echo through the Smoky Mountains to the tempo of tribal drums Native Americans reenact futile but peaceful efforts to keep their homes to remain one nation to survive to thrive as ancestors did scent of death ascends from sacred grounds woodlands that have forever lost their greenery now just cloudy scenery peaks that resurrect dreary history “reservation,” a trifling gesture from a selfish territorial invader speak to the spirits at sunset beckon them to keep their honorable legacy alive then feel damp anguish in foggy daybreak souls returning to the forest floor only to resurrect again when darkness drapes the mountains once more the curse the shame Smoky Mountains Cherokee birthright denied
*Written August 20, 2014

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Date: 8/31/2014 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful, meaningful poem, Carolyn!!!... In short... Genocide... :-(( Congratulytons on your win (I'd have placed yours 1st!!)
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 8/31/2014 11:23:00 AM
Actually "congratulations"...
Date: 8/29/2014 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem Carolyn done so well within its theme. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:17:00 PM
This is truly wonderful. I am currently reading about Tom Horn, credited with finally bringing in Geronimo. I love Indian history, this is a sad period in our past. Well done my LNC, I will call soon. BG
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:30:00 PM
this is a very strong piece from you, carolyn, lovely descriptions throughout, hauntingly beautiful and atmospheric, quite eerie - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:18:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Carolyn, relating a sad day in our history. I have been to the Cherokee reservation in the Smoky Mountains...such beautiful country. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/21/2014 2:39:00 PM
Interesting choice for your work..They struck gold in owning casinos maybe that is the Cherokee revenge(people get addicted)..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Have a great Florida day..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2014 11:50:00 PM
Perfect title for this poem, Carolyn... poignant. The earth is continually watered by the tears of the disadvantaged, displaced, and of those who care. Well done as always. Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:05:00 PM
thank you for this, to many poets overlook this subject, you have given it life with this poem...on 6/20 I posted a similar poem titled Warrior's Sorrows...I've been on a couple of poetry sites over the last 6 years and once a year I post my poem on the site I'm on as a reminder
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Date: 8/20/2014 11:54:00 AM
Carolyn, Such an enchanting and powerful write on the plight of the Cherokee Tribe...Their spirits are alive here in your words and in the blood and soul of many of their ancestors.......hugs Tim
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
WOW! CD...I can say nothing but GOOD about this write about our true Forefathers...Far before those white wig bastages reeked havoc on the tribes. Trail Of BLOOD, I refer to it respectfully. I spent 5 years writing up there in those hallowed Mountains, outside of Greenville, You could almost hear the tears of fear. I used to take an old chair of mine up to Carl Sandburg's Home, and sit on the very FLAT Rock spot, where he wrote a huge portion of his masterpieces. SPIRITS were all around!
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:15:00 AM
Carolyn u really hv power of words! How well u hv conveyed the message in your magnificent write! Hv read Eileen's poem too , quite an emotional n heartfelt ! All this has to end somewhere ! Thnx for sharing!
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:59:00 AM
This is excellent, Carolyn. Written from the heart and so very expressive. [I read it...and straight away it reminded me of Eileen's strong feelings in her Armenian poem. Then I scroll down to comment and right there I see Eileen's comment!!! What a coincidence!] Well done! // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, Paul...Thank you Carolyn. I'm touched by your kindness regarding my people. Bless your hearts for caring. There is so much injustice still in this part of the world. People die everyday in neighboring countries...children....people slaughtered....and the world is often silent. May God have mercy on us all.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/20/2014 6:09:00 AM
Dear Paul, You're so right. I just read Eileen's poem and it made me cry. How can we sit by as entire populations of people are wiped out? Thank you for telling me about her poem.
Date: 8/20/2014 5:30:00 AM
Oh.....I got goose bumps reading this, Carolyn. You "speak" so eloquently on their behalf. The Trail of Tears...Reminds me of the Armenian Genocide. One and a half million Armenians marched into the desert to die. What has gone wrong with the world? This needs to be published somewhere....The Native Americans are beautiful people and they have had so much taken away...Indomitable...that spirit must live on. It has in your write. Blessings.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/20/2014 6:10:00 AM
Dear Eileen, Indeed, we had the same mindset when we wrote our poems. In this regard, we think alike. I'm really enjoying your work!
Date: 8/20/2014 5:28:00 AM
Well said. Excellent write. Tfs
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