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Birthday I am a citizen of that country Today is her birthday Surrounded by barbed wire, Waiting for the command of firearms I think that everyone has birthday Somebody knows, somebody doesn't know Sometime valuable, sometime worthless. They have countries, they have rules Mathematical formulas are known They have birthdays, festivals Then the red , black, white, how many countries They have birthdays. If give up all the barbed wire, discrimination Mothers would be same with the smell of soil Mother would be human being Then birthday of the world, to me, your, everybody So today I feel My birthday has become one of the world's birthday. SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/16/2014 6:31:00 AM
Lovely, absolutely lovely! Congrats on your win, and happy birthday!
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Date: 3/15/2014 7:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Sandip. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2014 5:31:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win in the contest Impress me IV, sandip
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:08:00 PM
a nice poem , Sandip, Congrats on Giorgio's contest... SKAT
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:47:00 PM
Happy Birthday : )..The barbed wire reminds me of the happenings of Auscwitz..But you are from India right?Anyway barbed wire can be in many forms metaphorically.Nice message here!!!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/13/2014 2:48:00 PM
Auschwitz i meant...
Date: 3/4/2014 5:27:00 PM
Hi, Sandip. What is your country? I like how you tell of all humanity here. WE need a global community.
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