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Birth of a Flower

Gently grows the flower. Seeking petal perfection on the wings of a seed. Mating with the earth in dark richness, germinating transcendence. Evolution bursts free, spiraling ever upwards to greet a bright reality. Unfolding newborns, velvet in their sheaths of green. Begging the sky, they drink. Perfect petals push their way to efflorescence, lifting satin faces to the sun in reverence. Butterflies behold, as blossom unfolds it’s glory for all to see. The flower is born and Earth weeps it’s blessings. Gently grows the flower.

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Date: 3/14/2015 8:27:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful Riss! :) Thanks for your opinion on my poem. I' need to revise a poem. Thanks to you, I know which one I will work on. If you ever want to read my poems, to help me out I would appreciate the pointers. I'm no expert when it comes to perfect grammar. ps....... I like the unfolding of the flower. Always~ SKAT
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Riss Ryker
Date: 3/14/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thank you! Your very welcome about your poem, it WAS very good. Like you, I always welcome constructive critques on my poetry. Isn't that what makes us learn and grow as writers?

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