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Birth

BIRTH In the woods of Kree he sits spine straight erect Monk bereft of earthly joy and act Waft of the perfume of earth Fills the evening mirth Willow sings Birth The Bell rings Round the spirit girth God's light on the brow no dearth Monk sits pink glow moves heart circumspect In the woods of Kree he sits spine straight erect An Invented Form - Help Me Name It! - Poetry Contest Sponsor Andrea Dietrich Form: Andreana

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Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 10:44:00 PM

Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 1:16:00 AM

Congrats on fine win Rajat wid this awesome write!

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/23/2015 7:06:00 PM

Nicely done, Rajat! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/23/2015 2:48:00 PM

Congrats Rajat.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2015 8:32:00 AM

Well deserved win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/23/2015 7:53:00 AM

Your poems are always unique! Grats on a well done win! ;)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/23/2015 4:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Rajat. Like the image and atmosphere that you managed to create; great rhyme, too. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2015 2:21:00 AM

congrats on your win Rajat:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2015 1:11:00 AM

Congratulations in my contest,Rajat. Good rhyming words.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/16/2015 8:03:00 AM

Fantastic images, you bring the world of the monk to life. I also like the name you gave to the form.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/16/2015 8:14:00 AM

O Monterey. Thank you very much. Hope you are okay. I like the name Andreana for this form but its Andrea's choice which is final.Love

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/15/2015 11:36:00 PM

Wow Rajat... can visualise the serenityof a monastery in the midst of snow capped mountains... beautiful pen Rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/16/2015 8:10:00 AM

Yes Nad, serenity is an important word in this tremulous world.Love

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/15/2015 11:32:00 AM

Very nice pen Rajat! Enjoyed reading your piece, my dearest friend. A 7 from me! Good luck in this contest! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) xxx D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/16/2015 8:07:00 AM

Love D. God bless