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Bipolarized

Bipolarized
Frantic partly paranoid the voices to avoid Edgy and unstable like a Chinese wind up toy Maniacally depressed a tragic life long mess Always worrying about what is to worry about next Clinically not sane a rollercoaster ride brain Sadness killed sorrow leaving a terrible stain Unsafe and skeptical no term that is medical Kidnapped on vacation in padded rooms of Hotel Federal
Written for Contest: "Rhyme Battle IX" 10/16/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/12/2016 5:46:00 PM
"Always worrying about what is to worry about next"--uncannily like someone I know who is bipolar.
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/16/2016 2:34:00 AM
Me too! Thanks for reading
Date: 3/12/2016 11:40:00 AM
Brian, this is quite wonderfully penned on a sad condition, I am liking this 7 ~
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/16/2016 2:33:00 AM
Thank you and it is a very sad condition indeed

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