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Big Foot

The great Oregon forest is Big Foot territory, the Sashquash. His image may be seen or imagined through the tall timbers. My friend and I strayed from the foot path at midday while exploring. We were joking with each other about being attacked by Big Foot. The verdant forest was cool with the smell of pine, quite divine. The meditative influence of the forest soon relaxed us into silence. Trees seemed to communicate their thoughts as we mentally conversed. Suddenly we heard a guttural sound before we saw him through the pines. A hairy body, maybe seven to eight feet tall, stopped his search for food. He looked up as he heard us gasp and we began to run for our lives. He began to chase after us as our feet flew and fear gripped our hearts. Looking behind us while still running, there was no longer any sign of him. We ran for half a mile until we felt safe enough to slow our pace. Hugging each other in great relief of our escape, we were still trembling. All that was left was to tell our incredible story that no one believed. for Act 1, Scene 1 contest by A Rambling Poet A true account

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/12/2010 9:34:00 PM
I don't believe it..............but the writing is so real.........smile!
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Date: 4/9/2010 4:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win here, scary wasn't it? I was looking at the past contests and saw your title, I don't know if you read my sighting. I was 8 feet away from the one I saw. It is called `I'm still afraid`
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:59:00 PM
Hey, Congratulations, Connie. I am happy you placed with your Sashquash tale! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:36:00 PM
Hey Connie, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf....Jimmy
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:16:00 PM
Dear Connie, my congratulations on your win in the contest! This was an exciting contest, but I didn't participate! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Connie~. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:25:00 PM
Congrats Connie on your winning poem in Constance's constest.. an amazing true story account and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/8/2010 4:33:00 PM
Very well told, Connie.! Good luck, looks good for the contest. I just read yoiur comment on "little feet" so naturally I had to read your "Big Foot"!! :) thank you so very much. I will check the soup in a bit. Thanks again, yoiur comment means much to me.-Robert
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:19:00 PM
yep, it is hard to believe, no carcasses have been found. Oh well it makes a good tell. at least you got some exercise!! :)
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Date: 2/7/2010 11:16:00 AM
Great tall tale that you have told in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.Sara
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Date: 2/7/2010 10:58:00 AM
connie, this is one of the most interesting I've seen on the topic! an exciting write. I am late for church so I gotta run. I hope to read more of your poems later. I am not in the iambic contest, connie. I am helping Deb with it! iambic is hard for so many people. I want advice from you on what to use for the soup contest too. Hope to write ya later , ok. OH, and check out Mac's blog. something you might want to try! LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:23:00 AM
exciting adventure
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:40:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Connie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
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