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Big Brother Is Watching

They say "Big Brother" is watching you,
And I know that it must be true.
Someone sees and hears us all,
Whether we do good or if we fall.

That Someone is God's Son, Jesus.
Our Big Brother, He always sees us.
Everything we do, every word we say,
Jesus sees and hears everyday.

Not just our deeds, He knows our thoughts,
He knows the hidden secrets of our hearts.
Nothing is hidden from His watchful eyes.
He sees and hears each breath, each sigh.

Yes, Big Brother is watching us,
The Son of God, Christ Jesus.
But more than watch, He intercedes,
Asking the Father to meet our needs.

6/30/12 For Black Eyed Susan's "Big Brother - who's watching you and why" contest

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:56:00 PM
    I love this one Kim...I'm going to hav to Fav it! :o) Much Love,Dan

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Kim ,your poem is indisputably a number one winner to me.Love every line. Anne

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Quite an interesting take on "Big Brother"..I was waiting to hear about cameras on corners, and texts and phone conversation being overheard. Thank you for saving me from all Jesus' name!!! God Bless!!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 5:10:00 PM
    what an awesome message this is!! Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:21:00 PM
    kudos to you on your fine win, kim!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:24:00 AM
    Kim congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Kim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:53:00 PM
    What a lovely take on the contest. I think this is a number 1 entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 3:01:00 PM
    lovely poem Kim...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:35:00 PM
    congratulations on your third place win with this awesome write! Lori

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:07:00 PM
    Congratulations you tour poem winning.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Congrats kim on the win!!!

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:03:00 PM
    congratsd Kim on an excellent write and win for big brother theme luv..intriguing words .. I am dealing with a concussion since a nasty fall last week.. sorry for delay..

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 10:06:00 AM
    People who conduct themselves in public and private with this understanding that the Lord is watching them are the salt of the earth...this is a wonderful idea for a poem. Glad u enjoyed the poem I wrote about my mother's doll room. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 5:54:00 AM
    Great faith based work..Enjoyed reading this morn..A testimony of your faith..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 7:42:00 PM
    Awesome Kim,,,, has to be a " 7" ;} have a great 4th of july !

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:19:00 AM
    If George Orwell were alive today, he would have appreciated this write.

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 12:57:00 PM
    This is an awesome inspiration for this contest Kim. It's number one in my book and I wish you the best for the contest... but no matter.. Its still number one. thanks for your comment Kim. God love you as always

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 9:54:00 PM
    Nicely done Kim I agree he is the best big brother we can possibly have, luv vie

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 8:05:00 PM
    Beautiful, Kim! Very weel done! My best wishes in the contest! Ruben.