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Bid On My Love

Proposal of my love 'I plea' entice me with your song like the raging sea Grasp me with your warm breath of a hot flame safeguard me from the waves who come to claim. T. Reams copyright 11/27/15

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/3/2016 7:27:00 AM

Hi Tammy, Nice couplet. Enjoyed every line. Super 7 from me.........hugs

Roger Page

Date: 2/6/2016 5:10:00 PM

Ingites ones imagination Love Roger

Funom Makama

Date: 1/14/2016 11:35:00 AM

#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Tammy Reams
Date: 1/17/2016 9:08:00 PM

Thank you so much for the strong comment! Sorry I'm late on my reply.

Julia Ward

Date: 12/3/2015 3:29:00 AM

I hope it does well in the contest. Julia, :)

Tammy Reams
Date: 12/3/2015 9:08:00 AM

Hey Julia..I don't have this in the contest I'm the one who is sponsoring the contest. Thanks anyway for the comment.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/27/2015 8:29:00 PM

Dear Tammy Love feeling of this poem, but how can you go wrong when you write about the calming effect of the seas, cheri

Tammy Reams
Date: 11/28/2015 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Cheri! My passion has always been the sea. It has so many things from calm to power. Have a great day!

Constance La France

Date: 11/27/2015 4:26:00 PM

Tammy, this is a wonderful example for your contest, I hope I can write something beautiful for you

Tammy Reams
Date: 11/28/2015 5:16:00 AM

Thank you Broken Wing and coming from a pro as you are, I'm sure you will kill this one. Have a great day.