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Betrayal is the Bitter Potion

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Betrayal is the Bitter Potion

Betrayal is a bitter poison
Hearts that love sometimes endure
At times there is no reason or rhyme 
Yet, it always cuts deeply for sure

Betrayal is the bitter potion
Served by your sweetest desire
No reason or rhyme is there at times
Some will say the universe conspires

Betrayal is the unexpected
Un announced, knocking upon your door 
At times there’s no reason or rhyme 
It causes mayhem; it kills the joy

Betrayal is a silent killer
Insidious, it creeps in your bones
No reason or rhyme is there at times
Beware, it's a demon on the roam


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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:23:00 AM
    its the demon on the roam, betrayal strikes then your alone, i agree ...great poem here babe..

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Annalise, :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Great winning work that you have penned..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Congrats Annalise.....Seren

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:35:00 PM
    I hope you have never or will never be betrayed. But congratulations on a well deserved win, Annalise!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Annalise, many congrats for your placement in Su's contest

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:24:00 PM
    Congratulations Annalise

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:39:00 AM
    Annalise, ,a very nice win~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:06:00 AM
    Betrayal is a bitter seed to that gags the heart and stangles the mind. You've touched on the feelings well in your verses. Well done !! Congrats on your winning spot!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Congrats on win Annalise!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Annalise luv xx

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:33:00 AM
    The rhyming in some stanzas of lines 2 & 4 are not obvious and c1;c2 could perhaps been a bit tighter (as per the examples)eg 5 syllables & 5 syllables through out. I agree that betrayal is a bitter potion. Congratulations on your win, Annalise. Best wishes, Suzette

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:46:00 PM
    "Beware, it's a demon on the roam" well put my good friend! An excellent write... love Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:16:00 PM
    It certainly can be. Great Poem! Happy new Year.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Annalise, betrayal, should come with a full force ahead punishment. hate what the killer leaves behind*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I can certainly relate to this, my friend - thanks for all your kindness

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:35:00 AM
    WOW! What can I say about this. I can relate to it. I know what it's like. I've been down that road before. Bettrayal is a terrible thing. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:33:00 AM
    I'm becoming a fan of yours, Annalise!...Love the semi-repeating first lines and the alternating third lines...wonderful wisdom and insight too...Have a blessed 2013, my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:56:00 PM
    Yes, it will hurt deeply. It kills the trust and the vulnerability. Awesome poem, Annalise. Have a Happy New Year! Enjoy!