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Betrayal

Surrounded by numerous faces An intangible feeling lingers Lost in this treacherous world Of a nightmare such as this You were my strength, My shield in the tumultous rain In your presence I had peace Safe in your warm embrace In an instant it vanished A figment of my imagination You became a vile creature My handsome prince disappeared The same familiar hands Which gave me comfort Now stung like a wasping bee Scotching my very soul A willowy shadow of sadness Eyes Erupted like a big dam Big droplets hit the counter-top Beside the shattered glass The pain pierced my soul Plunging me into a bottomless pit Drowning in the deep despair Of your great betrayal

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Date: 11/8/2016 2:41:00 PM
Hey Abby. I can feel the writer in the write up and u went for the right words..it dope i dug it.
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Date: 8/17/2016 6:50:00 PM
Very good abby. Skat
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Book: Shattered Sighs