Betrayal

BETRAYAL Cassandra in me, you unleashed I sense in you a sunken moon You served me a casserole Of limping dreams, hollow love and deaf weeping dolls...... Looming from the dark, the scary flow of wriggling worms in my bed and they Eat me up, erode me up I sense this feel in you... Gleaming sharp blade of hacksaw Sways in front of eyes...I feel that Damocles sword is less powerful as its teeth slit my throat... Gushes profusely poisoned blood.... Hemlock coated Saw I guess... I sense you in this feel..... I also see another prophecy A deadly push from behind I get ... Deep into a dark dungeon Dangerous and bottomless I can feel your treacherous thrust I see a Renegrade approaching me With a murky coat in a miasma Filled with back-stabbing deceitful cruelties.... He rips my heart to pieces Scattered they fall on ground... a wicked smile of victory looms on his face as he pops into his mouth toffee of betrayal from the Pandora's box, which he held as his prized posession... I smell this foul filled cheater in you! ©Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/20/2015 3:46:00 PM

powerful pen in the shades of night anulaxmi beautifully painted betrayal wishing you a blessed week

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/21/2015 12:23:00 AM

Dear Liam, thank you so very much to stop to visit my poem and for your feedback:-) thanks agai...A blessed week to you too...love, Anu:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 7:51:00 PM

My goodness. If this is for a contest on dark poetry, it is winner hands down!! Lots of scary images in this one. Dark dark dark!!!

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/16/2015 9:51:00 PM

dear Andrea, thnks for visiting this dark poem.....and your feedback......love, Anu:-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/16/2015 2:09:00 PM

Anu, this dark write is well written.Your skilful write provided good imagery. Great job:-) Alexis

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/16/2015 2:12:00 PM

Dear Alexis, thank you for visiting my poem and appreciative words:-) happy you liked it....thanks again......love, Anu:-)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/16/2015 12:57:00 PM

Oh this is so darkly good, Anu! I love the startling imagery that just magically captivated and pulled me into this amazing piece! Well done, and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/17/2015 3:20:00 AM

Dear Pandita, so nice...you are familiar and a great fan of Pandita Ramabai! She was a champion for the upliftment of widows of India...A noble soul...and Pandita was the title given to her in recognition to her genius in Sanskrit language....well Nice to hear from you dear !.......love, Anu

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/16/2015 2:16:00 PM

Awwww! Thank you so much, my friend! I am a great fan of the late Indian poet, scholar, and Social Reformer, Pandita Ramabai. Have a nice day. Pandita

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/16/2015 1:07:00 PM

Dear Pandita, thank you so much for stopping to read my poem and i thank you for your words of appreciation and the 7 ! It means a lot to me!!! Pandita in our Indian language of hindi and sanskrit... it means a Scholar!Your name reminded me of it so told ...love, Anu:-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 12:45:00 PM

Wow such deep powerful chilling imagery Anu! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/15/2015 1:00:00 PM

Dear Jan, thanks a lot for stopping to read and for your words:-) Sorry I pasted reply to Eileen on your comment box..error regretted once again thank you dear and happy weekend love, Anu

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/15/2015 12:48:00 PM

Dear Eileen, thank yoo much for your sweet words:-) Hey..congrats on your win for on the Purpurated Lune poem...i just forgot to wish you..had Seen your name in the winners list happy weekend and take care dear:-) Love, Anu:-)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2015 12:39:00 PM

WOW! That's some write, my dear. Full of very clear imagery and angst. Powerful poem...stay strong.

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/15/2015 12:56:00 PM

Dear Eileen, thank you so very much dear for your sweet words:-) hey....congrats on your win on your purpurated lune poem! I forgot to wish you...had seen your name in winner's list happy weekend and take care dear love, Anu:-):-):-)