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Beneath, the Maple Trees

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I went for a walk today in the rain, and the wind took my hair blowing it about it felt so sublime and divine as I strolled beneath the maple trees and their leaves came tumbling down red, burnt orange and yellow like rain falling it was a perfect moment in time, so excited I gathered many to press within pages but sadly, they crumbled in my hand and I let them flutter away . . . _______________________ November 11, 2012 Free Verse/Beneath, the Maple Trees Copyright Protected, ID 11- 435-091-11 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard, Mid October Contest sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/ 2017 First Place ______________________ Submitted to the contest, Favorite Old Poem sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 2015 Third Place

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Date: 10/12/2017 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your win with this splendid poem.
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:16:00 PM
Very beautiful, BW, and a poignant image of the ambiguity of Autumn ... congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 10/10/2017 8:54:00 PM
a very enjoyable poem ...congratulation on 1st place...Autumn is in the air
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Date: 10/10/2017 8:32:00 PM
Absolutely divine. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/10/2017 7:56:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Constance! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 10/10/2017 7:21:00 PM
Lovely Broken Wings. You are so fluent with free verse. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/10/2017 7:08:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings. This is so real to me. I like to gather leaves for occasional 'Art work"-nothing professional. Not to wet; not to dry. Congrats. Good work my friend.
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Date: 6/10/2015 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on the winning placement here B W, got me thinking of all those pressed pieces in many books and memories..'
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 AM
Broken. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 8:28:00 AM
Love this image feasting poem my friend. Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:51:00 AM
simply stunning imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:16:00 PM
Hey nice one BW, SERENITY... lost in that perfect moment. Congrats
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Date: 6/8/2015 9:13:00 PM
A delightful write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:30:00 PM
stunning poem complimented by the picture Connie nice to see you on my winning list congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:34:00 PM
Oh my gosh , Shadow look at the comment below, it's Linda -Marie
Date: 11/14/2012 3:27:00 PM
IDEAL POETRY AND DELIGHTFUL IMAGES TAKE FLIGHT IN THIS AMAZING PIECE CONSTANCE MY FRIEND .. A TREASURE TO READ YOUR WORK AS ALWAYS .. HOPE U HAVE BEEN WELL LUV..
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:02:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful, Constance. You have such a special poetic soul. How are things going for you?
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Date: 11/12/2012 2:53:00 PM
awesome write here, Constance - love the crumbling leaves fluttering away
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Date: 11/11/2012 8:29:00 PM
I just loved the calm feeling that I got from this warm write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fun loving and delightful poem this evening! What a pleasant and beautiful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/11/2012 3:42:00 PM
wonderful write.... enjoyed it a lot...
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