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Beneath The Maple Trees

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Beneath The Maple Trees

~ I went for a walk today in the rain The wind took my hair blowing it hither It felt so sublime and divine I strolled beneath the Maple trees And their leaves came tumbling down Red, burnt orange and yellow It was a perfect moment in time I gathered many to press within pages But alas, they crumbled in my hand And I let them flutter away ~ _______________________ November 11, 2012 Verse/unrhymed Submitted to the contest, Your Favorite Old Poem, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Third Place

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  1. Date: 6/11/2015 10:25:00 PM
    BW.. My favorite in this contest, congrats on your winning write!

  1. Date: 6/10/2015 3:53:00 PM
    Congrats on the winning placement here B W, got me thinking of all those pressed pieces in many books and memories..'

  1. Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 AM
    Broken. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**

  1. Date: 6/9/2015 8:28:00 AM
    Love this image feasting poem my friend. Congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2015 3:51:00 AM
    simply stunning imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 6/8/2015 10:16:00 PM
    Hey nice one BW, SERENITY... lost in that perfect moment. Congrats

  1. Date: 6/8/2015 9:13:00 PM
    A delightful write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/8/2015 5:30:00 PM
    stunning poem complimented by the picture Connie nice to see you on my winning list congrats on 3rd place hugs

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    Date: 6/8/2015 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh my gosh , Shadow look at the comment below, it's Linda -Marie
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:27:00 PM
    IDEAL POETRY AND DELIGHTFUL IMAGES TAKE FLIGHT IN THIS AMAZING PIECE CONSTANCE MY FRIEND .. A TREASURE TO READ YOUR WORK AS ALWAYS .. HOPE U HAVE BEEN WELL LUV..

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:02:00 PM
    wow, this is beautiful, Constance. You have such a special poetic soul. How are things going for you?

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:53:00 PM
    awesome write here, Constance - love the crumbling leaves fluttering away

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:29:00 PM
    I just loved the calm feeling that I got from this warm write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fun loving and delightful poem this evening! What a pleasant and beautiful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:42:00 PM
    wonderful write.... enjoyed it a lot...