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Enhanced by peaceful solitude, in twilight, crimson crowned She stood in tensile grace, unmoved. Enchantment in disguise Lightly splashed by back light, where the tender grass had grown A white tailed doe, was grazing there, aware and keen of eye She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet, still she had not flown Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh? Or take a step, in chance my foot might rustle twig or loam? This stance of wills,...intense and poised. Would she dare to flee? She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet still she had not flown A monumental moment, as she stood before my eyes First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down There, in tensile grace she stood, enchantment in disguise Caressed in beauty, and sun embraced, revealed for me alone Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh? First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down Eyes made of glass, as windows are, in which the iris tongue We made no move...each one transfixed, no air in lungs to breathe So inter-laced, with life force crossed, in universal one Our spirits twined against the sky, beneath the copper trees ____________________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/19/2016 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Carrie. This was lovely! ; )
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:55:00 PM
Carrie, I fell in love with this right away...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Carrie, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:56:00 AM
Memorizing, congratulations.
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:23:00 PM
Ahh..you are very kind, and make me feel worthy, Shadow. Thank you so much, and for letting me share this place with those who I admire so much ! :)
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Date: 6/10/2015 5:57:00 PM
very pleased to see this poem again Carrie it still blows me away congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Date: 3/21/2015 10:23:00 PM
This poem is very beautiful Carrie. I see why it is a favorite of yours. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/20/2015 4:23:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your win with this wonderful poem, you painted such a beautiful picture with words, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:22:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful write Carrie!Words are less to say, Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:04:00 PM
Great Job Carrie, congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:14:00 PM
absolutely delightful imagery from start to end - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:30:00 PM
KIM, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/1/2013 2:21:00 PM
A NICE WINNING POEM CARRIE, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/1/2013 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/1/2013 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Beautifully penned poem. Deer possess such fragile lovely grace and you captured it.
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Date: 6/1/2013 7:20:00 AM
blown away grats on your win Shadow
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:59:00 AM
This is so beautiful, words almost fail me. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2013 5:59:00 PM
simply beautiful.... a classic ....congrats on a great win
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Date: 5/31/2013 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Carrie, and certainly a well-deserved first placement in the contest. Well done, my friend. :-)
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Date: 5/31/2013 5:25:00 PM
A beautiful piece of poetry! Thanks for submitting to my contest Kim
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Date: 1/12/2013 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie......Seren
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:53:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:52:00 PM
Carrie.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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