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What better sight could warm my heart than… Sunlight glinting off the water Where you swim in harmony With Neptune’s own rhythm Dancing with the waves Sweep, crest, surge, rest… Natural As the Sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/17/2008 9:02:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/8/2008 4:05:00 AM
Excellent, nonet, I could see her there perfectly...love this one, love Kristin
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