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Bell's on the Wind

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Bell's on the Wind

Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon

torn nails shred the bell cord
tin the sound in wind wails tinkle, tinkle

the might of death, a spasms rise
no heart beat but a curse
arise, arise, on full moon’s pull
to feed a need
a zombie hull

Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon

no smile, no scream, no blush the rose
arm thrust horror births
skin with bits of cloth
stand now, bone bare in places
long in tooth
to feed
to feed
the Blood Moon’s Curse

Bits and pieces
	bits and pieces
shattered ground writhes with the moon
soft the dirt still
	wet and warm
too soon
	too soon
		too soon
wait not, want not, run and hide
for hunger never ending rises
death but not
pain and hell
cursed they rise
	too soon.

Date: 11/1/13
Poet: Daphne Rising

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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:40:00 AM
    A very elegant, yet creepy poem, Debbie! I really love this one! It reminded me of "The Premature Burial", by Edgar Allan Poe. I think I will add this to my favorites!...Thank you so much for all of the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:18:00 AM
    lovely Debbie congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 3:19:00 PM
    This poem is well put together. Nice win Debbie...Roger

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Very well organized, Debbie. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:31:00 AM
    cool..... congratulations debs xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM
    ha, Nice in seeing this one again.. , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:24:00 PM
    I feel like I'm stuck in a horror movie with no place to hide. Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:59:00 PM
    Great writing and great win. Congratulations on your no. 1 Debbie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:22:00 PM
    I'm glad Leonora saw the genius of this one. Congrats AGAIN. hahaha and it is up at the top where it belongs.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Debbie, you rock.... . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 9:21:00 AM
    I always adore the way you write your art Debbie, I can feel the sense of eerie, beautiful and amazed at the same time, congrats for the first place, this is extremely splendid! Wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny *straight to my fave list :D

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
    I enjoyed this one very much. You created a intresting mood with your words. who is Daphne Rising??

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
    - Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem, Debbie !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend Debbie Daph on your well-deserved super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Congratulations Debbie...loved this the first time I read is an awesome poem...

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I remember this one and it's A VERY WELL DESERVED win. Congrats in PD's contest.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:25:00 PM
    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Congrats Debbie, A wonderful poem and a nice win... Roger

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:03:00 AM
    Debbie, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Scary zombie poem Debbie, very creepy and full of imagery. Thanks for the feedback, I was afraid that I had missed a direction or two on the ghazal,will make changes.