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Belief

Far away when the smiling day tiredly smiles The evening bride spreads her dress for miles My thoughts their twilight keep When tiny lamps awake half asleep Your image when suddenly appears and stops Like a deer grazing on dewy wet crop Then this heart flutters alone As the river runs on stones Lusts for love’s glory Shouts loud the sad story Morning and night falls the tears They are watered with horrid fears But He moves in amazing ways When end is near and no ray He’ll shower his blessings on the head Love will gather and diminish dread 27/02/2011

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Date: 3/4/2011 1:19:00 AM
very good my friend
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:50:00 AM
A powerful statement of faith, Tahera. I do think God does all He can to make the transition between life and death as easy as possible for us. The rhyme is well done and the images of the bride, deer, lamps and river are beautifully conveyed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:17:00 AM
Inspiration message full of hope and luv Tahera my friend.. without belief in the Supreme Being we have nothing... an exquisite journey into faith ..my friend.. good luck if for any contest posted luv..
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:12:00 AM
smile -- i love this tranquilities brushed canvas my dear beautiful Tahera ~ the brides dress; twilight; the tiny lamps waking; fluttering hearts ~ such wonderful images in lovely picturesque flowing as a gentle river through perfect rhyme and sprouting as a watersfall from the depths of ones beautiful Soul ~ so very beautiful my dear and a fave, just like You. ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:41:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn...I am so glad I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:56:00 PM
a profound thought with supreme images, tahera... lots of winning luck in the contest, if for one..:) huggs, nette
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