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Beings, Not Known To Outsiders

Smiling slightly sad Colibri said: 'Are you happy today, my dear? ...

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James Peranteau

Date: 4/25/2020 11:43:00 PM

it's ourn engram'z contain which readerz of great write seek and relish....welcome and enjoy yourn learn! Likewise, when your realize spilz 'pon these slips with poetic ease, as it does to all writerz of think, i will remember your indulge of this forum as being the excitable! much love, jamez

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2016 11:46:00 AM

Salamandra , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Diet Water

Date: 2/22/2016 9:10:00 AM

not to be rude but i asked for a poem not a story

Ggg Bbb
Date: 3/22/2016 2:08:00 PM

finally, put it to Allitteration! that was the core to begin this piece anyway

Ggg Bbb
Date: 3/9/2016 3:04:00 PM

studied more possibilities and changed description to "Narrative" i think it suits better, or? hope pure poem lovers wont be deluded next time;)

Ggg Bbb
Date: 2/29/2016 11:21:00 AM

i know this is bit primitive like for poetry...smth like playing scales on piano...have learned 5 to 10 new words with it:) and same length lines, they came mostly accidentally, that was a surprise. anyway, don't see any story here...single brief idea

Ggg Bbb
Date: 2/23/2016 8:13:00 AM

well, i described real meeting, that took place this January. but why is this a story? here even nothing happened:) i can give some percent of one and another & smth else - it is usually a mixture, isn't? changed to original 3 collumns view now, instead of 1, though full lines didn't fitted here in page. but then i found it also interesting, unusual. Thanx for comment, it made me to read poem vs story differences, i liked also to read your poems, poetical stories?