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Being the Wind

I’m like the breeze, to Influence motion in trees I sail boats along I blow my way in her hair Bringing a smile to her face I massage her neck With my great miracle force She folds her arms tight And watches as I blow on Moving through the fields of grass Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/31/2011 8:03:00 AM
I like it Russ! Your visuals are always first class. This is why I read your stuff every time I come to the Soup.
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Date: 12/30/2011 11:48:00 PM
A lot of imaginative, metaphorical descriptiveness here, Russell. Another impressive entry.
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Date: 12/29/2011 11:43:00 PM
breezy sort of poetry Russell mate... sounds right though
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Date: 12/29/2011 6:37:00 PM
i like the way this flows with such vivid, caressing language...wow, russel, your wind touches me so! :) huggs!
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Date: 12/29/2011 6:08:00 PM
This is lovely. Nice write !!
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