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Being Human

Being Human Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Barely a matured lady I wondered how I can grow to be complete Every day I wish to feel as ideal as I can without being too confident Inside I know I too can be like most of society, inspired and whole Next as humans we are created to bring repose and collectiveness Growth within our merit can make us sure we can believe in ourselves Heard only the way a human being can decipher, I see others so Unheard; if only they could see all the benevolence they carry freely Maybe there is a way for us to see our integrity with virtuous morality After praying I realize we all sustain love, hope and true forgiveness Now I see that the goodness in us can generate flawless harmony Date Written: July 5, 2016

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Date: 7/10/2016 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic, Luloo, written with much wisdom and hopefulness. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/10/2016 11:56:00 AM
Well written,,,,Congratulations
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:49:00 AM
Nice write...Congrats. :)
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Date: 7/9/2016 11:06:00 PM
This is lovely luloo! Congratulations on your wonderful top win! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:26:00 PM
Really great Laura, congrats on your fine placement!
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Date: 7/6/2016 4:36:00 PM
this is wonderful, Laura! So good to be back and reading poems of my friends again.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/7/2016 4:06:00 PM
thank you Andrea! Glad your back too lady! :)-luloo
Date: 7/6/2016 10:54:00 AM
This is so nice. GL :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/7/2016 4:06:00 PM
many thanks Sunita :)-luloo
Date: 7/6/2016 5:55:00 AM
"After praying I realize we all sustain love, hope and true forgiveness, the goodness in us can generate flawless harmony" - Such true lines:) loved this one:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/6/2016 10:49:00 AM
thank you very much Jo, you are a sweetheart...:)-luloo
Date: 7/5/2016 1:57:00 PM
such an uplifting, intimate write, lou..we are always in the process of becoming..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/5/2016 5:18:00 PM
thank you sweet and lovely Nette! :)-luloo

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