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Being Free and Loving It

Here goes a response to a depressed girlfriend To the one who saw in a man, something more than a friend To the one who sunk into an illusory agony Believing herself to be, only with him, in complete harmony Dear girl, know that your happiness lies not in a man Happiness begins in yourself You must be the one to hold out your hand And learn to give it to yourself Dear girl, men are ruled by their drives Once they are done, they shall pretend to be no more alive Guided by their instincts They shall use you and ruin you, till you become extinct! Dear girl, his sister asked him to talk to you And tell you that he no more wants to hear of you Tell me, do you believe that? Can you be that dumb Can you be, in love, so blind? Dear girl, is he the reason for your happiness? Tell me, is he the only man alive in this world Someday, you shall meet the one who shall make of you a princess Even a queen, for only you he shall adore! Dear girl, open your eyes, and see this world How beautiful it is, breathe in fresh air Be grateful for what you have so far Remember, emotional needs are not always met as fair So learn to smile And even fly once in a while Cherish your children And pretend to be the only rose in the garden!

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Date: 4/3/2014 10:16:00 PM
A G., , congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/3/2014 12:09:00 PM
Anoucheka, :) Congratulations, the poem's awesome. Enjoyed your vice.... luv LINDA
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Date: 4/3/2014 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Agony Aunt, enjoyed it, Anoucheka
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