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Behind a Veneer

Despondent, she stares in the mirror, hoping to see the girl of her youth. Yet years of tears have weathered her skin, and the sun's harsh light confirms the truth. Her wrinkles, masked by a coat of paint, she touches up whatever's peeling. And the false face staring back at her, reflects the distress she is feeling. A dab of powder fills in small lines, while a hint of rouge brings her cheeks back. And the bags under her eyes are smoothed as mascara lashes are brushed black. Red lips complete the porcelain doll, and all her blemishes disappear. For once more, she transformed her image, hiding her years behind a veneer. (Quatrain) 2/6/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2018 7:12:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/10/2016 10:18:00 AM
Very nice pen, Well written and well done.
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Samantha, I appreciate you friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 2/8/2016 12:51:00 PM
Excellent pen! I feel this same war with the mirror and aging. I never had to wear makeup before. Now I feel hideous without it.
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate you friendly visits and comments. Emile.
Date: 2/8/2016 12:17:00 AM
Strong flow with an embodied message...... the mastery of language here is worth emulating. You have a wonderful touch, Emile.... A def 7!!
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Wilfred, I appreciate you friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 2/7/2016 3:32:00 PM
very strong message and image within, so many turn to ways to hide the signs of aging especially those with money...i guess no one wants to grow old...except those that never had a chance, my mother passed at 55 and she always said she could never see herself as an old women...she didn't have to....i liked this one! Might fine writing :)
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra, I appreciate your friendly comments of support. Emile.

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