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What if bees were to rule the world! Humans mere creatures, While the queen sat on her throne, Sending out her armies, Their mission was to patrol the earth, Protecting all their nectar, Keeping nature pure as honey, In their charge positions, Antenna wave signals sent out, Stopping people from killing all the plants, Saving the next generation of bees, Out they went early morning, with a sting in their tails, Riding on the breeze like a wave, Through the skies, they flew to their pollen, Ate until they were drunk with fermented nectar, They sang songs at their victory, Hummed great tunes all the way home, Arriving back as full as could be, Queen frantically buzzing awaiting her males, As they arrive back to deposit their spoils of war, 19/09/2016

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Date: 10/8/2016 4:57:00 PM
And I'm back, just to congratulate you on your well deserved win Wendy. ..Abosede
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/8/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Abo xxx
Date: 10/1/2016 11:21:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. Well deserved win ! Congrats
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/2/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you Tanks x
Date: 10/1/2016 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Enjoyed your perspective JE
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Date: 9/30/2016 11:00:00 PM
Hi Wendy, What a imagination you have. It shined in this humorous write. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/1/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis xx very kind of you x
Date: 9/30/2016 1:11:00 AM
Very imaginative, Wendy:) congratulations on your win:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/30/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Joe, xx
Date: 9/30/2016 12:38:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win! X]
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/30/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita x
Date: 9/29/2016 8:54:00 PM
I like how you took an imaginative slant with your entry. It is so creative. Congrats.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/30/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, xx
Date: 9/29/2016 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations Wendy, fine win...
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win Wendy
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Date: 9/29/2016 2:46:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win :-) Hugs
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, I'm happy x
Date: 9/29/2016 1:20:00 PM
Wendy-loved this one :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thank you laura Congrats to you also x
Date: 9/29/2016 12:17:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to bees, Wendy, and very creatively written. Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra Im so happy x
Date: 9/29/2016 12:03:00 PM
Dear Wendy, back with my hearty congrats !// love, Anu:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, its great x
Date: 9/29/2016 11:58:00 AM
Love your take on this theme, Wendy! Congrats!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, so much Kim x
Date: 9/29/2016 11:41:00 AM
great poem full of humour Wendy well done on 3rd hugs
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Date: 9/28/2016 12:46:00 PM
Wow, Wendy, I love this poem a lot of action, place a perfect impression in my mind :) a 7 Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/28/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, so much, Eve very kind of you x
Date: 9/27/2016 11:33:00 AM
This is so full of wonders and hope that someone else should really come to teach us some lessons! Good Luck Wendy. It deserves a win! :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/28/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita, x
Date: 9/26/2016 2:59:00 PM
Hello Wendy, I reay enjoyed this flight of fancy, I hope it does well in the contest.'
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/26/2016 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Joe x
Date: 9/26/2016 5:23:00 AM
Dear Wendy, Lovely write , enjoyed it, good luck in the contest, Love, Anu:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/26/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Anulaxmi x
Date: 9/24/2016 6:54:00 AM
- Wendy, a great poem - A loved and hated small animals, but very important for life on Earth - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/24/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine xxxx
Date: 9/23/2016 2:07:00 PM
Where would we be without Bees - great write Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/23/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Jan xxx
Date: 9/23/2016 8:55:00 AM
Actually this is very deep Wendy, you question and answer, and with your wonderful mind, create a common sense poem.. a joy to read this is.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/23/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Harry that's very kind of you xxx
Date: 9/21/2016 3:28:00 PM
this is very creative writing, Wendy.Nicely done.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/21/2016 4:50:00 PM
Than you Andrea
Date: 9/20/2016 5:33:00 PM
I like bees, and I think we'd BEE in trouble if any of this ever happen... enjoyed. LINDA
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/20/2016 10:10:00 PM
Thank you x Linda
Date: 9/20/2016 5:10:00 PM
Wow for this gem. I enjoy the pleasure it gives. Thank you for sharing this fascinating poem..............A.M.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/20/2016 10:11:00 PM
Thank you x Afolabi
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