Bee's

{bee's} the dancing machines please stay away from everyone's knees you very nasty {bee's} Please please please stay away from especially my knees you very nasty and honorable theives {bee's} so please fly off to those daisies for these these these are the only way I want it to { bee's } Little Song Jenny And I came Up When She Was 4 LOL Thanks All For Stopping Also Entry For Matt Caliri's Contest Funnest-hardest Poem Ever

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/14/2009 4:45:00 PM

Katherine, Congratulations on your well deserve placement in Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever. I enjoyed the fun in this one, too. Lovingly, Dane

Sue Mason

Date: 6/12/2009 8:40:00 AM

Very clever here, Katherine ... wish I could hear the tune ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Matt's contest !!

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/10/2009 5:47:00 PM

Congrats Kathy on your excellent win in Matt's contest! Love, Shar

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/10/2009 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations to you and Jenny

Date: 6/10/2009 4:28:00 PM

Cute poem has me smiling. Nice dedication to Jenny. Congratulations on your ninth place finish in Matt's contest. Enjoy your honor my friend. Karen

Kat Crane

Date: 5/10/2009 1:20:00 PM

I love the bees. This is very cute! Kat x

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/7/2009 6:58:00 AM

Wonderfully imaginative ... should be fun for a child sharing this moment with you. Love always

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/7/2009 6:32:00 AM

Please please please stay away from especially my knees you very nasty and honorable theives Very nice stanza honorable thieves describes the honey makers perfectly. Whimsical write very nice.