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Bedtime Stories of Love

**************************************************************************************** Someday beyound this flesh of mine that has been short circuited throughout time.... Lying atop the shag carpet with a glass of cold water and a piece of rye bread Wondering amid the yellow, orange, red and blue flames; dancing in their gaze ~ Considering the purpose, parallels and paradox of all things; folding wisdoms page?! Clarity revealing its truth betwixt the tears and pain; poured from perfections cup.... Currents coursing through my veins these revelations calling my name; splashed Aneath crystal waters with their blood soaked bread; merged in the flames ~ **************************************************************************************** ....“Bedtime Stories of Love” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2012 9:17:00 PM
Sounds worse than the burning bed. Huggs TLee
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:03:00 AM
Lovely descriptions John; don't we have a wonderful language to describe feelings and life around us. This is so special.
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:27:00 AM
I love the orange red and blue flames.. the blue is somehow sad and cold,the orange warm and the red so bright ...So much to read between each revelation of a bedtime story.. Very talented John.Charma
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Date: 2/5/2012 6:53:00 PM
I love it!
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Date: 1/13/2012 12:37:00 PM
Miss you, secure I'm Mrs. Robinson :) am blessed. I love you. I can relate to this poem of yours. well written piece. Take good care and Know I Always Will Care for You Deeply.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/20/2012 1:41:00 PM
oh I forgot that defense mode. Thanks for thinking I was sweet once.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
like on heehaw right?
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:02:00 AM
Smile ˜ Thank you Lulu, that's just soooo sweeeet!:) ˜
Date: 1/3/2012 3:50:00 PM
"purpoes parallels and paradox of all things" where did you get that!
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:18:00 PM
SMILE * "FROM 'MY BEAUTIFUL HEAVENLY FATHER.'" ))))
Date: 11/22/2011 12:38:00 PM
This is wonderfully written-Kelli
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Date: 11/17/2011 12:30:00 PM
PD's right, I feel the passion burning through each word...beautifully written...thanks again for stopping by...luv shannon
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:30:00 PM
lovely lovely lovely... love the full passion you have JOhn.. good night,..p.d.
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:49:00 AM
Smile ˜ "As She Screams To Claw At The Invisible Skies * Shaking These Foundations In All She Knew * Exploding Waves And Quivering Tides.... * ....'My Crimson Bride'" ˜

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