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Becoming Spring

Winter’s newborn fusses in blustered billows; Colicked thunder rumbles from tantrumed lightning. Blossoms nursing heavenward – April showers. Christened is springtime

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Alexia Rowell

Date: 10/1/2015 10:10:00 AM

I hope the sapphic verse is easy for all of us Nice writing by the way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2015 4:44:00 PM

oh, I just saw he had only top three mostly.Well Awesome then!! we fortunate in how he did the winners. I was thinking to myself that there were so many good ones. No wonder he gave mostly top wins.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2015 4:43:00 PM

well, it's on the list, but I think it was one of the BEST. Congrats, my friend.

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:49:00 AM

Hi David. Congrats on the win. SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:05:00 AM

David:) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2015 3:52:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry.. These are not so easy to write but is seems that you have excelled..Of course, I don't know about meter but the theme and story are excellent..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2015 2:20:00 PM

VERY unique and creative entry in the contest. I better see this on the winners' list!