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Below is the poem entitled BECOMING A WOMAN which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I will be all woman...

I will be the mother...
A mommy who will tenderly care..
A mama who will prepare..
A mom who will be her "kid's saver" .

I will be the wife...
The lawfully other half..
Who will stand on his husbands behalf..

I will be the light of a home..
Each will feel happy not alone..
Giggles; laughters will be heard..
If there are tears, sure it's rare..

Despite these, still i'll be a lady..
Even if there'll be malady..
I'll remain gentle yet sturdy..
I'll be jolly ready...

I will walk in grace..
I will attempt "eloquence"..
I'll not live in tight fence..
Rather i'll be alive knowing sequences..

Even if wrinkles will steal me..
Even if illness claims my health..
Even if old age squeezes life from me..
I know, i have live as a woman..

***Hope you can check my personal blog as well: Thank you so much for reading my composition… God bless us always….. >> Olive Eloisa ? 

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  1. Date: 1/8/2015 12:57:00 PM
    A lovely woman, mother, and future wife you'll be. A caring heart lives within you. Your future hubby and child doesn't know there is a huge love awaiting them.... Powerful!!!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2014 4:21:00 PM
    Yes you will, but to me your already all woman, James :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 4:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry Olive, you write with an open heart that delights the reader, thank you for stopping by on my poetry take care big hugs xxx

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 7/23/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks... heartfelt hugs too :)
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 7:55:00 AM
    An excellent declaration of self and how YOU will write your future. This is how it should be. Excellent piece!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/22/2014 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks.. :)