Get Your Premium Membership

Beckoning Her

~ She reached for the ribbons of her gown not knowing why, but she held them in her hand as she floated through the ever changing mist, whites and grays in a swirling pattern, mesmerizing in blends and shifts, blurred yet possessing a clarity she could not explain or cared to think about right now She looked down on herself in her bed sobbing, clutching tightly a dampened pillow, lonely, a photo in a silver frame on the bedside table, missing... now very confused as a peaceful awareness wrapped about her warmly, caressing her spirit, washing away the pain, the sadness, the torment which she fought now to remember as it drifted below, creating new shadows about her feet but distant, never forgotten, she couldn’t, it was promised… Once more the satin ribbons were pulled gently, guided as if a feather laced kite on a silver string embracing blue skies, dancing about in the slow rhythm, spun in clouded dreams, breathless she soars higher, it seems towards the sun or perhaps a light of a different source, it felt soft, cool beckoning her and she yearned for it… for some reason it felt right Stars swept past her in wiry glistening designs like a sparkler at a summer cookout waved through the air in abstract cherry-lime glowings and apple pie tickles and she smiled, for the first time in a long time as the moon disappeared on the horizon, embracing this new experience she continued allowing the tender tugs on her ribbons to move her freely, when she felt something, it was a hand on hers, helping her hold the ribbons, it felt familiar, safe, comforting When she saw his eyes, as clear as she had ever seen anything, deep and friendly, soothing just as she had remembered…remembered? He took her by the hands and he came even more into focus “Hi there, I have missed you,” he sighed and she knew it was him He was here, wherever here was, he held her in his arms now as he said, “I promised you I would love you eternally, I have been waiting for you” She cried again, happy tears as she whispered. “You did, you did, is this…” “Shhh,” he placed a caring finger to her lips…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/14/2016 5:39:00 PM
Hi Chris, You penned a well written heartfelt story. I was drawn to every word. It's a beautiful love story. The bond between the two characters is so strong and beautiful. It's a well crafted piece of "enternal" love. I enjoyed the end but I feel like there's more to the bond story. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, that is such a nice thing to say. There could be more to this bond but it is pretty tight as it is. Though I do know that love knows no boundaries. I appreciate your kindness always and look forward to your visits to my poetry.
Date: 10/14/2016 3:19:00 PM
A beautiful rendering of eternal love.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 3:33:00 PM
Thank so very much Tim. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 10/14/2016 2:32:00 PM
Holy, I have goosebumps and are you deliberately trying to make my mascara run?? Utterly heartbreaking and lovely in the same breath. I adore your stories, epic indeed, and the imagery is off the charts Chris!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 2:42:00 PM
Paloma, your wonderful comments are like daily gifts for me to open and always they bring a huge smile to my face.
Date: 10/14/2016 2:10:00 PM
Very very sweet Chris...Oh Im favouring all yr poems..so it seems..but I really like it. a fave.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 2:41:00 PM
Charmaine, you are such an angel, I am so happy my poetry touches you in this fashion. Thanks you so very much for everything.
Date: 10/14/2016 1:30:00 PM
Wow! Unbelievable poem! I have you in my favorites. Thank you.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thanks you Heidi for your always wonderful and encouraging comments on my poetry. I am more than thrilled you liked this one. I am a big fan of yours as well. Can't wait to read more.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things