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Because You Said I Wouldn'T

Because you said I wouldn’t, I took this leap of faith. Wrote this note to show to you That some things never change. Five long years have proved that, Who knows you more than me? He may have you for the moment But Your heart belongs to me.

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John Freeman

Date: 12/17/2011 12:00:00 PM

Because you said I wouldn't or couldn't starts a lot endeavors Prince. Thanks for the honor of reading your worthy poetry, Congratulations on your worthy win. Have a Happy Holiday and New Year. Agape, Moses"

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/16/2011 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Nice poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest E. Love, Carol

Virginia Frayer

Date: 2/25/2011 2:03:00 AM

It's hard to know something such as this yourself but the other seems so blinded, then again it may be meant to be we can only tell when the time passes us by and with it revealing our new destiny. Sometimes sadly that can seem to take a lifetime that we are not willing to wait for. You have done a great job describing feeling here thanks for the read~ Virginia

Anthony Nutter

Date: 2/18/2011 2:50:00 AM

Excellent piece, hard to place ones heart and feeling out in plain view. www.freewebs.com/abcedit