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Because of You

i dont know what this new feeling is its something i must have missed out on this new thing feels my soul with bliss nothing but a surprise, i begin to feel withdrawn i cant handle so much tension it is time to be forgiven i thought it was good, i thought it was great but all i did was take the bait my emotions cant make up their mind they are changing as often as the tide you left pieces of my heart intertwined you have made it anything but and easy ride because of you i begin to beakdown in my rhymes, i will drown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 2:26:00 AM
Very good poem, love is strong and hard to compete.;)
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