Beautiful Sunrise -The American Whitney Style

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~Beautiful Sunrise~ ( Double Whitney ) Sunrise shines Appears again Spreads around Cover mountains Beach, above Clouds, softly pass A band of geese, fly high The air's cool And the sun's warm Delightful Wonderful time Warms my heart The songbirds sings His love shines, upon my face. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 June.07.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Whitney" is a syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/8/2016 4:14:00 AM

How wonderful to feel "His love shines, upon my face." Beautiful write, Dorian:)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/8/2016 5:29:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jo,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/8/2016 2:46:00 AM

Beautiful sunrise poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/8/2016 5:28:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Ravi,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D