Beautiful

A beautiful blue bird sits on thy pear. Wlondering why it is so lonley. Other birds are prettier on the out. But that blue bird is the prettiest cause thy blue bird is pretty on the in and on the out

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Skat A

Date: 6/14/2016 6:45:00 PM

NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, HH.... SKAT

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2015 1:37:00 AM

Hi Halie, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2015 11:44:00 PM

Halie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Diane Christian

Date: 6/14/2015 12:29:00 PM

Lovely write, I like blue birds

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2015 12:06:00 PM

- Welcome to P- Soup, Halie ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)