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Look at us, all lonely people
Tasting your words as seasons roll
For dreams are reborn glazed by fire;
When strings explode, plucked to inspire
As lines croon, throbbing sighs kindle.

Notes of vision unchain time’s riddle
Let it be, verse rocks in vigil
Guitars strumming peace on live wire,
Look at us.

To all you say, make life flicker
While long and winding roads still dwell
Teaching the world love’s not for hire.
As fused pair, lyrics reach hearts’ spire
To cuddle hope, feeding desire,
Look at us.

~Lenon-Mc Cartney Team, inspiration
from the songs Eleanor Rigby, Let It Be,
and The Long and Winding Road

~To my uncles for their Beatles passion

~Beatle Mania Contest: Rhonda J. Saunders

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  1. Date: 11/25/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Yes look at us 'all the lonely people' congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your win nette! This is a beautiful tribute.

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:52:00 PM
    very cleverly crafted poem nette...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Nette, , Congratulations on your win. Awesome Beatle Mania Poem.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Without a doubt, three of their very best, especially 'Eleanor Rigby', whose tombstone is now a landmark in Liverpool...Beautiful tribute my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 11:42:00 AM
    congratulations nette I seem to be congratulating you all the time lol xx

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 10:39:00 AM
    - Beatles will never die! - Think I could the text on almost all the songs. - "Happy Times"! - A contest that was fun to take part in! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, NETTE !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 10:12:00 AM
    This is great ! I remember a HS friend and I in a argument and she told me I would be "Eleanor Rigby !" Congratulations !!

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Looks like a contender for the contest.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Very emotionally written and well done, Bravo great visual well expressed, I enjoyed reading this tonight. Also i'm glad you like my I recall poem it made me think alot this contest and so i just went with the inspiration of the contest. thanks again.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:52:00 PM
    your uncles taught you well nette, one of the Beatles best songs,, and they would be proud to read this poetry,,,

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me for the contest..Enjoyed reading your well thought out work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Enjoyed your lyrical mood, nette

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Love is definitely not for hire or to be passed from one to amother after a contract closes down.This says so much clever girl.An excellent post.Happy weekend sweet friend.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:42:00 AM
    - A fantastic well written poem my friend, Nette.- (sad & true) - Have a great weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Amazing song of lonely people with real lyrics, done with excellent imagination. Loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:40:00 AM
    This is incredible Nette, such an amazing write here my friend! I truly loved reading all this lonely people inspired poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, you have written an illustrious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:00:00 AM
    Hi, my very dear friend Nette! Your poem is truly amazing! Perfect/excellent tribute as well for lonely people like me;). Quite lonely now 'cuz you came here & i wasn't here. Besides, my aunt passed away and I can't go home. Was crying last nyt when my mom informed me but now smiling 'cuz of your poem (Is this is for ode, this is great!) & finally back at soup;)). Hope all of u there celebrated Todos Los Santos with optimum weather! Big hugs to u! Talk to u again soon. love lots always, Leonora