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Beating Heart

a Heart. Heart Is beating. Is beating Sending hope and promises..... pumping ideals and ideas reducing life's stresses. ready to look for love to accept to take.. for always.. xxxxxx.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/16/2017 7:55:00 PM

Adorable - words and visuals.

Ara Belle

Date: 8/14/2014 9:26:00 AM

This poem looks as good as the words used. Nice one, Seren. LoveLots, Ara

Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 12:17:00 AM

The ideals and the ideas, the things that keep us, well I should say me, going. This poem if looked at quickly seems simple, but is very powerful. Is it the nurse in you that pointed out this duality between the body and the mind? The physical aspect as well as the ideas. I really liked this poem, hopefully there was a duality intended lol, if not, well that's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for sharing.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:58:00 AM

Glad you looked beyond the words......Seren

Rollo West

Date: 1/15/2013 9:59:00 PM

This is really beautiful my dear friend, just like the creator. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 2:53:00 AM

Aww thank you Rollo, glad you enjoyed it...Seren

James Fraser

Date: 1/15/2013 1:19:00 PM

The artwork is simply adorable, and the poetry is incredibly warm and loving. Nice one Seren :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 2:54:00 AM

hmm was just looking at it looks like its been broken now will have to fiddle with it.. thanks for the comments James....Seren

David Williams

Date: 1/15/2013 12:35:00 PM

Seren my beating heart sent you a soup mail....

David Williams

Date: 1/15/2013 11:13:00 AM

Seren what happened / where did it go??

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2013 5:16:00 PM

“The heart may sell a part of the soul to get what it wants.” Heraclitus. Beautiful image and feeling, wonderfully expressed!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:41:00 PM

thank you Demetrios...Seren

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/14/2013 4:32:00 PM

Love it Seren, clever. Just inspired me to try this form in the future. xox

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:41:00 PM

Me inspire someone, wow thats a first.....Thanks Robert ...Seren

Naldeem Bout

Date: 1/14/2013 7:42:00 AM

you have given poetry meaning and shape, i like it. i do hope to be as imaginative a poet as you.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 11:14:00 AM

Hello Naldeen I have only been on this site for about 6 months. so I am a new writer. They are all friendly here, come and chat anytime...Seren

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/14/2013 4:01:00 AM

WOW! This is lovely in shape and in content! I love hearts! I'm a hopeless romantic! You've done a great job with this! Glad I read this today! Hugs!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:29:00 AM

Thans Eileen not my best shape but never mind. Thanks for calling in.. Seren

David Williams

Date: 1/14/2013 3:08:00 AM

Seren very well done, I like the way you covered the possibility of reading from left or right....David

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:28:00 AM

Thanks David lol always cover the inevitable..Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/14/2013 1:31:00 AM

You are so good at shape poetry , well done and he is there waiting, cwcth (that doesn't look right ) xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/14/2013 5:28:00 AM

Lol cwtch. Whose doing it?