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Beach Walk

Out on the shores, So cold and still, She beckons for Her void to fill Her lonely beach Waits for my feet, Her empty skies, My eyes to see Through wisps of wind, She calls my name; She takes my sins And kills my pain And in this place I am content – On sun soaked sand My soul finds rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/20/2010 11:00:00 PM
Woooh, i love the end, couldn't have wrapped it up any better, good job. Id appreciate it if you could take a look at a few of my poems and be brutally honest and tell me what you think
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:57:00 AM
I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:06:00 AM
Well expressed thought
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