Get Your Premium Membership

Be the Keeper of Your Pain

This is Poetry , for the reader INTERPRETs , Why won't you leave ? Isn't you whom betrayed me with your actions ? Do I really care to tally whom started which action or reaction first ? No, It longer matters you see Thee thrill is gone in fact died in me Do I want to live with anger and madness anymore ? Please honor my wishes , and just walk out the door This time take all you have in which you entered my life with. I only want you to find peace and love in your soul of tortured memories. For these memories lie within you long before I met thee In innocence wanting to cure and love the soul within realizing I can not save you nor be your keeper of all pain. I Love you , Yet Love is not going to save you through this I let you go now let me go and let us be free . I no longer wish to live with the lies anymore , let me be free. Only happiness will return with change , you will see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/11/2013 11:07:00 PM
So many emotions lingering deep here.To lt go of someone and stop believing the lie of a once promised land.When love is shattered like a broken vase it can be mended but not renewed..Changes do bring happiness..many times. I am glad to read such beauty.. and tnks for your kindred comments : )
Login to Reply
Date: 11/27/2013 3:37:00 PM
I think many of us have been in a situation like this before. Letting go and moving on from a painful relationship is the only way to be truly free. A very deep and emotional poem. Really great work, Shanity!
Login to Reply
Rain Avatar
Shanity Rain
Date: 11/27/2013 5:23:00 PM
Thank-you my friend and awesome poetess !
Date: 11/27/2013 12:06:00 PM
Shanity Your work is amazing.
Login to Reply
Rain Avatar
Shanity Rain
Date: 11/27/2013 5:24:00 PM
Thank-you Chuck M. :) when I have a chance , I will read your poems . Thank-you for reading mine . S.R.
Date: 11/17/2013 4:58:00 PM
Great poem, Shanity. Nice method of writing too, Shakespearean mood. Deeply express, and enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
Login to Reply
Rain Avatar
Shanity Rain
Date: 11/26/2013 9:58:00 PM
Thank-you , I just noticed this comment , it was a darker poem indeed , I use all emotions in writing . I will check out your poems !!
Date: 11/8/2013 3:49:00 PM
heartfelt beautiful piece
Login to Reply
Rain Avatar
Shanity Rain
Date: 11/13/2013 11:43:00 AM
Thank-you Liam :) I love your visits as well. Seems like a long ,long, time !

Book: Reflection on the Important Things